Project Comments

Report and presentation 2024

Thank you all that gave me some surprises and sometimes interesting idea in your project presentations. They were nice!!!! The original idea of multi-modal data mush be too new and too difficult to collect data, but many of you could do that. Only that you did not organize data into a format ready for deep learning analysis. It is ok, coz in later year you will learn those skills. As a whole, most of you did a good job! To improve yourselves more, read the rubrics so that you will know in what directions should you may choose to improve your abilities and to make a great project. I am glad that though it was difficult, most of you could give me a very clear objectives and the reason to start the research in your executive summary, if you had made that!

Yet there are rooms for improvement.

For presentation, not a few of you could not properly maintain eye-contact with your audience. There are many tricks to maintain your audience focus, learn more as you advance in your presentation experience.

In writing, short-form of words, like DLC should be used with explanation in its first appearance of the report or presentation. You have to let our audience understand your business.

** About using AI **

A group put AI a good tool to use to solve a data input problem. However, some of you were too lazy (JerryL) to write your own report and use AI extensively (like chatGPT) to do the job!! You were basically replaced by AI! Lazy and careless you were!!! Group members in this team should have opposed and rejected the lazy and cheating idea to work out a report. Now, everyone suffers in the low grade of the report part. Never again do that. Otherwise your whole group will fail the project. AI can only help you draft your idea or touch-up your English, it can never replace you, or else you have no value in your role of your work, and your study. Why not your employees simply use AI, they do not need you!!! This time, teammates of this group are unlucky, in the lucky draw you were pushed into this group with bad and lazy working culture; but still it is lucky for you to see that you have to voice out when you see something is wrong. You must, otherwise you suffer along with those people who has bad ideas about doing a job.

Besides that! Thank you!!!! Your project reports provided me new idea of using AI. Hope your experience, as you expressed in the last part of your report, can lead you to a better you. That is what we call improvement. Enjoy the rest of your short university life. Learn to be good, not bad!

Data 2024

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Max Sample size so far	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
404 NOT FOUND	Population aging and the development prospects of the elderly care industry	P2420553 JIANG BOWEN JerryJ P2403774 LI PUI IAN Angel P2420631 GUAN CHENYING MaggieG P2420572 CAI KEXIN Marius P2403801 TSANG HOI TONG Elina P2420531 LOU YITING Betty	6	1, 250kb data, with source* less than 150dps	Nice idea about an industry! The project title cannot fit the requirement. Population related records are only number, not multi-modal data. There is insufficient data for the project. You need massive data: First you have to collect it, then you count the number. Only after that you can create some chart. Checkup sa01.pdf of the project requirement, and see and my comments for your seniors.	0.5%	0.5%
Poe	Business Software Project	P2403814 MAK CHON HEI Rex P2420612 XIE YUYANG Jennifer P2420650 LIU YING LeoL P2403793 CHU CHEOK IENG Phoenix P2403780 LIN YU TAN Lin P2420528 QU YULIANG Jimmy	6	2, over 70kb data, with chart and source* less than 170dps	The project title cannot fit the requirement. The content is about finance of 2 internet companies, not multi-modal data. There is too little data for the project. You need massive data: First you have to collect it, then you count the number. Only after that you can create some chart. Checkup sa01.pdf of the project requirement, and see and my comments for your seniors.	0%	0%
JerryL	Coca Cola Vs Pepsi Cola	P2403742 LAI CHON IN JerryL P2420625 MA HAIXIN MaggieM P2420591 WU RUOXI Jane P2420547 LI TONG Emma P2403833 CAI SIU WANG Cai P2420663 LYU YUTING Alice P2403755 KWOK CHUN SUEN Ali ??	6 -> 7?	2, over 700kb data, with source* less than 140dps	Nice idea about F&B industry! The project title fits the requirement well. Data with numbers, chinese text and probably images, related to multi-modal data*, but still too little data. Data not organized in nice looking format yet. You need massive data: Collect more of that, then you count the number. Only after that you can create some meaningful chart. Check how people trained AI system and sa01.pdf of the project requirement, and see and my comments for your seniors.	+1%	+1%
Lilvy's group	GDP pf different industries in the past five years	P2420679 LOU YIWEI Lilvy P2420566 NIU CANHENG LeoN P2403820 LEONG CHEONG CHON Tammy P2420606 LIU XUHANG Connor P2004979 TSANG SOK WAI Tiffany P2424963 SHAN ZEZHONG Carl ???	5 -> 6?	3, 18kb data! With chart. Failed to fulfill the project requirement, less than 66dps	The project title cannot fit the requirement. GDP records are only number, not multi-modal data, so there is deficient of necessary data for the project. You need massive data: First you have to collect it, then you count the number. Only after that you can create some chart. Checkup sa01.pdf of the project requirement, and see and my comments for your seniors. Doublt submission!	-2%	-2%

Grouping 2024

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Max Sample size so far	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Nil	Nil	P2420553 JIANG BOWEN JerryJ P2403774 LI PUI IAN Angel P2420631 GUAN CHENYING MaggieG P2420572 CAI KEXIN Marius P2403801 TSANG HOI TONG Elina P2420531 LOU YITING Betty	6	NA	Wrong submission format! No team name, no project title, double submission	0% - only this time we ran short of time that there was no penalty!!	0%
Poe	Computer	P2403814 MAK CHON HEI Rex P2420612 XIE YUYANG Jennifer P2420650 LIU YING LeoL P2403793 CHU CHEOK IENG Phoenix P2403780 LIN YU TAN Lin P2420528 QU YULIANG Jimmy	6	NA	Wrong submission format! No member information in email content	0% - only this time we ran short of time that there was no penalty!!	0%
Jerry	L	P2403742 LAI CHON IN JerryL P2420625 MA HAIXIN MaggieM P2420591 WU RUOXI Jane P2420547 LI TONG Emma P2403833 CAI SIU WANG Cai P2420663 LYU YUTING Alice	6	NA	Wrong submission format! Email not CC to all members	0% - only this time we ran short of time that there was no penalty!!	0%
Nil	Nil	P2420679 LOU YIWEI Lilvy P2420566 NIU CANHENG LeoN P2403820 LEONG CHEONG CHON Tammy P2420606 LIU XUHANG Connor P2004979 TSANG SOK WAI Tiffany	5	NA	Email not appear in my mail box!!!!	0% - only this time we ran short of time that there was no penalty!!	0%

Presentations and reports 2023

Thank you all that gave me some enjoyable time for your project presentations. They were full of surprises and sometimes interesting idea on using Excel to explore opportunities in AI! Very well done most of you! I enjoyed things like: your extra skills on difficult Python programming for data visualization and you live demonstration of data manipulation, actually with many interesting functionalities. You utilized the course materials on using Excel functions!!!

Two groups of you have chosen to collect massive data so that it can fit into the requirement of AI analysis. very well done! Yes, you paid good attentions right from the beginning of the semester in class and did some research on AI and know some characteristics and requirements for the applications! Thus, you could utilize some more advanced functions in your study! Very good your working attitudes! However other groups only collected very simple and chose to live through the semester with more leisure. It might feel nicer but the outcome was a project not that attractive and interesting. Do not start your life easy. Remember Mr. Steve Jobs? "Stay hungry. Stay foolish. Never let go of your appetite to go after new ideas, new experiences, and new adventures." Live a meaningful life that you will not regret.

When your project made use of data to tell a story you should tell where you got your data from. Reliable data source is as important as reliable information. Explaining your reliable data source can help the convincing power of your information. To tell stories with the charts was a major purpose of the project. Many of you could do that well. In that, some of you did not have figure number and figure title in the report. It is difficult for your readers to follow your text with the figures! Many of you are weak in the Q&A section. My questions about charting for proportions could have been answered quite easily with the ideas in my class exercise. Just relax and calm down to answer, when you are being asked.

Yes, as many noted: what questions to study are important, but very difficult when you start the project with little ideas of what to achieve and to do. It will be an iterative and continuous process while you work on the project. Project is like that, it is an exploration rather than a homework that you have a single path or rule to follow. Some of your background was full of something like research questions. Although it was not the perfect setting, but it was nice to have that in mind. You will know more how to do that with more trainings. I will see to your growth.

Many of you could speak excellent English. Clear, concise and natural! I love that! I felt like watching weather reports at home! Thank you very much!! However, many of your boys were paying respects to the presenters, during the presentations. It is very inappropriate and an act of immaturity! You were very impolite in attending presentation. Not only you talked, you even disturbed others, including me, to listen to the presenters! This kind of disturbs is unacceptable in all similar events! You will be expelled by security and legally you are wrong. Behave, men!

It is difficult not to have motions in working on project. However, I want you to know whenever you want and something decent it is always difficult. There will always be differences in opinions in many, like properly topic selections and research questions, and even work schedules. University is a place to prepare you for this real cruel world. Make yourselves a mature individual so that you can be part of this human society. Lazy bones will wither and die. I do not want to see any of my friends, like you, to regret when it is too late (it will come sooner than you imagine now). Learn to make yourself a useful buddy for your dream job and corporate with kinds of different people. You are lucky: Some of you are super smart that you can learn from them and make yourself a better you.

Some silly mistakes. Some of you spent too much time on the section member contributions that could not help scoring! And some report printed with on thin margin. And some were unable to follow the simple instruction in my SA01 to print out a report. Hope you can do better than a high-school student sooner. There are a lot to learn other than classes.

After all, good job! Thank you, I was glad that your projects provided me surprises after surprises. Hope your failures, if any, can tell you how to do it better next time. That is what we call improvement.

Data 2023

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Max Sample size so far	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
ABCDE	阿里巴巴	LI P2303357 CURRY P2303382 ANDY P2303403 IP p2303376 WILLIAM P2319742	5	+13k data points (dps)	Email without text message (impolite)! Some plotting but not all by themselves, not necessary indeed.	+0.5%	+1%
six	The Trends of Different Digital Companies in the World Market	xiao p2319801 jayden si p2303395 angel P2303363 thompson p2303338 mervin p2303422 tom P2303303	6	+3k data points (dps)	Email showed their successful cooperation* Already some analyses in the excel file, not necessary indeed!! I am going to lose my job Data from different products and domains. Data size is a bit too little.	+1%	+1%
LOL	Use Ai to analyze and improve the success rate of enterprises' overseas expansion	p2303322@mpu.edu.mo Billy p2303416@mpu.edu.mo Suki p2319783@mpu.edu.mo Tiki p2303319@mpu.edu.mo Jayden hoi p2319723@mpu.edu.mo angel p2319758@mpu.edu.mo moreno	6	1178 data points (dps)	Email without text message (impolite)! Data problem in R38, ~\270t (Profit) Dollars in different units!	+0.5%	+0.5%
sunshine	How Can AI Benefit People's Lives?	CHEN GUANNAN Andolina P2319761 LIU YONGHONG Ken Liu P2303298 CUIZIFAN Fannie P2319777 Qiu YINGYUHE Yuhe P2319710 XU WEIYE Bruce P2319796 SU ZHOUXING Josh P2319739	6	300k+ data points (dps)	Email without text message (impolite)! Great data collection**	+1%	+1%

Registration 2023

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Max Sample size so far	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
ABCDE	阿里巴巴	LI CURRY ANDY IP WILLIAM P2303357 P2303382 P2303403 p2303376 P2319742	5	N.A.	Perfect without much consultation!!!! Good at following written instruction* Ugly and chinese project title, boz!!!!	+0.5%	+0.5%
six	waiting	xiao p2319801 jayden si p2303395 angel P2303363 thompson p2303338 mervin p2303422 tom P2303303	6	N.A.	Double submission X It was perfect at your first submission. Do not constrain to much of what should do; consider and decide. This is what adults have to learn. Difficult at the beginning, but it will be easy.	-2% (waived, only for this time)	0%
[empty]	[empty]	p2303322@mpu.edu.mo Billy p2303416@mpu.edu.mo Suki p2319783@mpu.edu.mo Tiki p2303319@mpu.edu.mo Jayden hoi p2319723@mpu.edu.mo angel p2319758@mpu.edu.mo moreno	6	N.A.	Inexperienced in email! Empty email title (wrong submission format) X Fear and rush filled the decision process. Anxiety about making mistake was itself a weakness. Calm down and think next time.	-1% (waived, only for this time)	0%
sunshine	world	CHEN GUANNAN Andolina P2319761 LIU YONGHONG Ken Liu P2303298 CUIZIFAN Fannie P2319777 Qiu YINGYUHE Yuhe P2319710 XU WEIYE Bruce P2319796 SU ZHOUXING Josh P2319739	6	N.A.	Double submission X Careless in reading written instructions.	-2% (waived, only for this time)	0%

Presentation and reports 2022

Very nice your work on both the presentations and the reports. Nice presentations and reports. I saw informative data, beautiful charts and sensible analyses. Some aspects of yours surpassed my imagination! You were able to collect data from different online sources. Many of you use extraordinary Excel functionality like pivot tables and charts, filtering and some data aggregation techniques. Some of you even used advice tools to create diagrams like by SPSS or Tableau. Very good trials although they were not perfect. This is exactly what I want: you learn by doing. School is a place allow that you to make such mistakes. Keep trying!

In your presentation, try to get audience attention before you actually started. Lighting, voice, screen effects are all tools you did not utilize. You should have tried to find someone who have those powers to start! It was too much like a routine boring reading in most of your starts. For charting, many of them were great, but some were not fitting the stories you wanna tell. Say, for complex changes, you shall have created charts like in percentage changes so that countries of different GDP scales can be presented in a single line chart. Stacked multiple column charts can be both in 100% or in raw number, think about what to tell then create charts for that.

Two groups missed the executive summary, obviously they did not review my requirement carefully before their submissions. Writing report is the basic in business project, you should learn how to write a report, simply follow the project guideline. In modern business world is important to have a logical presentation. The conclusions should follow the analytical results that you spend time to build.

This is your first decent project. Many of you are inexperience in expressing your good work. Be reminded that it is not a homework. You cannot fill the blanks just as what you did in high school. You have to try your best to show the merits of your project. I am sure every one of you tried your very best to do something that is extraordinary and other people did not do. Only you could see that difficulties and you used all your wisdoms to solve them. Those were the parts that you should elaborate more because they show how smart you are. While many of you could not do that in both presentation and report, I had to ask for your Excel files. In the next project, make sure that you can show the best parts of your project.

I can see many of you did not make corrections even after the demonstration section. By doing that you gave up your chances to improving your project. With some painful experience, I am glad that some of you understand using WeChat to communicate is no good. My kind of group projects is difficult. You should have worked together physically so that you could communicate fluently and effectively without misunderstanding.

Some groups were very diligent in data collection. Very good, you scored some bonus on that. Some groups used filters in their collected data so that they could work on the analysis. I am sure they tried the best they could for the complex data. Very well done, smart!!! Well, they shall see it complicated the way they stored and analyzed, mixing these 2 data processing stages should be confusing to you. I believe by now you know the difficulties in how to store data effectively, and for their analysis, and actually, there are many more stages to inside. Hahahah, yes, you were working on something very advanced in the world of Big data. By year 3 you shall know how to professionally deal with it. In the meantime, ponder more on that and that can help you know understand why when I tell you the way.

Congratulations you have started learning and paved your way to more advanced analytic skills! Looking forward to your next show.

Data 2022

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Max Sample size so far	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Sunshine	The development and trends of pandemic in countries	P2202956 Chloe P2202790 Gary P2202811 Brian P2211000 Stella P2202921 Mr. Ma	5	16 countries, too few	Country-level monthly data of pandemic with regions, but other dat is of different formats and frequency. Some charts! Quite interesing to analysis with your basic setup. You would better find some more countries and better another source, with the world scope like WB, NYTimes, Wikipedia, Our World in Data, CEIC, WHO, etc. In order to analysis properly, you have to put all data into a single table. Columns shall be of different fields (or attributes), so you can create charts based on that table.*	+0.75%	+1.25%
blue	The development and of pandemic in countries	P2202859 Angela P2202897 Mori P2202918 Ada P2202937 Mike P1803719 Tomas + Bob	6	6 places, too few	Mixed of city-level and state-level data! Data of pandemic and economics, with different formats, scales and structure. Many individual charts, on simple scale. Quite difficult to analysis in different bases. You would better find some more cities and better another source, with the world scope like SHOWN as above and for USA: CDC COVID Data. In order to analysis properly, you have to put all data into a single table. Columns shall be of different fields (or attributes), so you can create charts based on that table.	+0.5%	+1%
Orange	2022's topic : The development and trends of pandemic in countries	P2202902 Elva P2202878 Eddie P2211032 Lisa P2211013 Luke P2202830 Alisa + Eric	6	6 countries, too few	Country-level data with different time-frequency of measurement. Data of pandemic and GDP growth rate, with different formats and structure. Some charts, but on strangely defined scale, year occupies space in USA! Quite difficult to analysis in this form. You would better find some more countries and better another source, with the world scope like SHOWN as above. In order to analysis properly, you have to put all data into a single table. Columns shall be of different fields (or attributes), so you can create charts based on that table.	+0.5%	+0.5%
The Light of Data	The Development and Trends of Pandemic in ShangHai	P2202943 Helen P2211029 Harry P2202843 Niki P2104023 Alan P2202824 Jessie	5	2 cities, far too few	City-level data of pandemic and economics (many!), with very similar structure. They adjusted it a little. Some charts, with data label, beautiful, but on ill-defined x-axis, ambigious! Quite difficult to analysis with only a few cities. You would better find some more countries and better another source, as above. In order to analysis properly, you have to put all data into a single table. Columns shall be of different fields (or attributes), so you can create charts based on that table.	+ 0.5%	-1.0%

Grouping 2022

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Sunshine	The development and trends of pandemic in countries	P2202956 Chloe P2202790 Gary P2202811 Brian P2211000 Stella P2202921 Mr. Ma	5	Perfect! Proper email pattern* Use my generatl project title only.	+0.5%	+0.5%
blue	The development and of pandemic in countries	P2202859 Angela P2202897 Mori P2202918 Ada P2202937 Mike P1803719 Tomas	5	Good! Use Canvas to send email*, I do not know we can do that! Use my generatl project title only. Next time, write to me in English ONLY for official course commication!	+0.5%	+0.5%
Orange	2022's topic : The development and trends of pandemic in countries	P2202902 Elva P2202878 Eddie P2211032 Lisa P2211013 Luke P2202830 Alisa	5	Nice, informative, but not a proper email pattern yet.	+0.0%	+0.0%
The Light of Data	The development and trends of pandemic in ShangHai	P2202943 Helen P2211029 Harry P2202843 Niki P2104023 Alan P2202824 Jessie	5	Double summission! You were in a rush: you were the first group emailed me, but missed important information! An english idiom to learn, 'look before you leap'. Lucky you show me your title* I appreciate that! You shall collect data more than one city (not only SH). You shall collect data of many cities, if you choose to analysis city-level data.	-2% + 0.5%	-1.5%

Presentation and report 2021

Satisfactory presentations and nice reports! Many of you had very good logics and reasons for your designed questions. You started your survey with very good online tools and then nice analyses, although not all results were eye-catching. Some of you could show some comprehensive highlights, like using scatter plots and good multi-column charts to tell stories. And you used those findings on your business ideas, so then a business could take advantages of those pieces of information. You did not elaborate too much that you did not do, good! It helped people focus on your major contribution. I can se many of you know the essences of the project now.

However good you were, there were rooms for improvement. One group scored very high, but their report submission was seriously late, huge marks were deduced. Otherwise, they should have surprised the others. Similar problems for some other groups with no executive summary, no charting result in their report or no legend in charts. In work, make sure you got a checklist of things to do. That helps.

Other than skills in analysis, that you are learning, you shall develop a lot more others: presentation, logical and social. Let me start with something easy to understand.

You shall organize your presentation topics so that they can appear logical, and more importantly, so that you audience can follow easily. Your introduction logics shall be from easy to difficult, from simple to complex ideas. But make sure you allocate reasonable time to your topics. Introduction is important, but it is not your core, so it should not be long. In comparison, your analysis is your core and contributive part, it should be allocated more time. Usually, the time allocated shall be proportional to the marks assigned. And time is precious, do not duplicate your content in presentation, some of u did in the presentation!

In your analysis, it should be logical. You shall start with your sample profile. And exhaustive use of a few or even one analysis to tell many stories is not good. Your analysis shall be specific to tell a story; so design your analysis for each story you wanna tell. And, this is an empirical study, try to stick your discussions to your findings, not your logical and possible explanations of the phenomenon. Your analysis with diagrams and charts should be the cores.

Audience management is never easy. It is a science of attention. Try lighting, sound, images and graphics as your tool. Be flexible to your circumstance, you shall make adjustment accordingly, due to equipment failures, unexpected slice in PPTs, etc. Also, try to control your audience by presenting the best parts of your findings that they do not know. An essence of presentation, and report as well, is to show people that you are smart and know something they do not know!

Looking forward to your better work next year!

Data 2021

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Max Sample size so far	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Sunny Lily	Affected by modern society and COVID-19.The E-commerce become the Mainstream of the consumption	P2102451 楊志恒 Danny p2111016 朱宏伟 Lucas P2102289 甘倩怡 Winnie p2112263 严天卉 Brooke p2102348 張浩民 Homan P2110954 庄文烨 Helen p2110960 涂宇阳 Oscar P2102445 LEONG CHI WANG 梁志宏 Joe	8	165	Nice title, good idea but too long and bad expression. Wrong submision email title, put to their excel filename! Nice questions set! Missing fields in Remark, Media and LANG. METHOD (Q35 should be in number, not text like Alipay). No raw source for my checking (needed before your demo). You may leave the missing data blank; remove your "\". Collect more data and make corrections before your analysis.	+0.5% - 0.3%	+0.7%
Web shoppers	Web shoppers-Does online consumption impact physical consumption?	P2111041 Chen YUANXUAN Kevin P2102426 Huang CHILUN Eric P2102313 Ng MANHOU JackyNg P2112586 WU ZHENGQI Hyman P2102367 CHIO SONGMAN Johnny P2102413 Chek CHIWENG Jacky P2102407 Kuoc ChonHei Issac P2102464 VAI SIO NAM 韋兆南 Sam	8	228	Nice format for money data field. Nice sample size. Think about your Q3 data format, for easy analysis. Q57 should be in number. Raw data needed only at time of demo later, but they provide a link to download, good consideration - good for work attitude*	+0.5%	+1.5%
Illuminant	The impact of the Covid-19 on the development of e-commerce	P2111862 Valentina Hua, P2110935 Lily Ren 任美霖, P2111022 Nicole Yang 楊婷婷, P2110922 Julie Sang, P2110973 Zoe Zhao, P2110992 Skylar Nan, P2110989 Owen Zhang P2102351 LAM CHAN NAM 林震南 Andy	8	164	A proper email form. LANG shall be only 1 to 2 number! Missing fields in Remark and Media. I believe your Q123 should not be as submitted!!! The title is nice but looked like for changes: if so, it is not easy for direct analysis. Nice notes for your numbering of data. Think also about METHOD - a very difficult part for your present analysis skill. Perfect data input. All groups can continue their data collection, for better results.	+0.5% +0.5% -1% +1%	+3%
(NO.4)	(empty)	P2102300 AO IEONG KA HEI 歐陽嘉希 KaHei P2102329 CHEANG IO KIN 鄭耀乾 Louis P2102292 HO CHON IN 何俊賢 Jerry P2111003 何铭宇 Clark . P2102392 XU JIANNING 許健寧 Jason P2110903 ZHANG SHUYANG 張叔陽 Afonso P2102386 LAM CHIN FAI 林展輝 Alex P2110916 魏运浩 Jack . p2110941 KUNBAO YANG Paul	9	124	Wrong submission email title! No indication of project idea at all. Quite nice questions set. No sufficient data collected! 160 minimum for 8 members, even when u have my discount! Missing fields in Remark, Media, LANG: 42 in it? What it can mean? Other than that, perfect data input. and Data is not Date. A proper email form.	-0.5% - 2% + 1% + 0.2%	-0.6%

Proposal 2021

Team	Title	Members	Members #	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
1	Sunny Lily	P2102451 楊志恒 Danny p2111016 朱宏伟 Lucas P2102289 甘倩怡 Winnie p2112263 严天卉 Brooke p2102348 張浩民 Homan P2110954 庄文烨 Helen p2110960 涂宇阳 Oscar P2102445 LEONG CHI WANG 梁志宏 Joe	8	The scale (1 to 7), which side is good or more? Q1 is not a good question, you can find it out in your analysis. Q2 is good and contemporary, but can u relate it into your objective? Nice Q3, I believe you are studying the transition of consumer behavior! Very nice! Make sure you set a good objective to work on.	+0.5%	+0.5%
2	Web shoppers	P2111041 Chen YUANXUAN Kevin P2102426 Huang CHILUN Eric P2102313 Ng MANHOU JackyNg P2112586 WU ZHENGQI Hyman P2102367 CHIO SONGMAN Johnny P2102413 Chek CHIWENG Jacky P2102407 Kuoc ChonHei Issac P2102464 VAI SIO NAM 韋兆南 Sam	8	Good are all Qs, only Q3 is too simple. And change your subject of analysis to "you". Good idea in your proposal, the rationale sounds with benefits to our society!	+1%	+1%
3	Illuminant	P2111862 Valentina Hua, P2110935 Lily Ren 任美霖, P2111022 Nicole Yang 楊婷婷, P2110922 Julie Sang, P2110973 Zoe Zhao, P2110992 Skylar Nan, P2110989 Owen Zhang P2102351 LAM CHAN NAM 林震南 Andy	8	Many versions of proposal rationales; some very detail and good, some too brief. the long ones are on the right tracks! Good ideas, yet lack communication. Well, online class is like that: not your fault. Keep working, but with more comminication, it would be more difficult to get to consent, be patient. As for the Qs, nice direction, but the subject has to change to person "you": Q1 ambigious term "e-commerce project categories".	+2%	+2%
4	(NO.4)	P2102300 AO IEONG KA HEI 歐陽嘉希 KaHei P2102329 CHEANG IO KIN 鄭耀乾 Louis P2102292 HO CHON IN 何俊賢 Jerry P2111003 何铭宇 Clark . P2102392 XU JIANNING 許健寧 Jason P2110903 ZHANG SHUYANG 張叔陽 Afonso P2102386 LAM CHIN FAI 林展輝 Alex P2110916 魏运浩 Jack . p2110941 KUNBAO YANG Paul	9	Nice Q1 to match to other questions in the questionnaire, Good Q2, but you may expand it to more catogories of products. I guess your Q3 would relate to your other secret objective! Nice and brief proposal.	+0.7%	+0.7%

Report and presentation 2020

Nice all your presentation for year-1 projects, although many of you were inexperienced. Many of them were incomplete, but you could still got to your points. Some of you have a very complete set of analyses. Some even have extra tools to analyze data, like SPSS & Python!!! Some of you have heavy inclination to Python programming!! Well done! You are no more pupils, but really students, who supposed to study! You have a very good start! You had overcame the most difficult part: the start! Not easy for self-learners on that! Amazing! Extraordinary!! I am glad that even in your first decent project you could do that, although eventually you will do that!

The most difficult part in presentation is the selection of materials. One group of you could make very good improvement in prioritizing the topics to say now. As a rule, you should present those topics in which you have outstanding and important findings, according to the objectives. Good, you did that.

However, some of you showed you were inexperienced in this kind of project. Your presentation should be different from teaching. Other than your motives and reasons for the study, you should have shown people how you used tools to analyze data and hence some results. Those were your project objectives and tasks. And the outputs were your findings. Use those findings for your business, show people how a business can take advantages of those pieces of information. A group of you totally missed the report requirements as posted in my first chapter. Poorly executed writing process you had. They did not even give me a cover page!

And in presentation, try not to say sorry easily, politeness shall be expressed in some other ways. The Chinese culture of over-humble is not a professional manner. In presentation, simply show what you did, and so preparation was very important. This kind of research used quantitative analysis, it tries to find supports for a business decisions. Thus, you could have made better uses of my questions in my defined sections. My questions are actually about consumer characteristics, some of you knew that, but not all of you could utilize them for your work.

Conclusions are not easy for you. Each of them shall follow as directly as possible from your results. The means was the survey, so you could have to rely on your quantitative analysis analyses. The logical flow between results and conclusions is not easy for you; some parts of your report content, particularly conclusions deviated too much from that. Try to get used to this scientific research method for business. This project is your first exercise on using such logic. You got some experience now, hopefully it can help your development.

For year-1, not bad overall. Keep learning, keep growing. Never cheat! Looking forward to a better you next year. Merry Christmas!!!

Data 2020

Team	Title	Members	Members	Max sample size	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
TRT	Online platforms open up new forms of consumption	Lebron:P2010096 Downey:P2010180 Crisp:P2010155 Fanny:P2010136 Nina:P2010101 Anita:P2010123 Melody:P2010174 Vicky:P2010161 Hardy:P2011981	9	250	Great sample collection and clean data input * some user input need your judgement (很多, 12 hours a week, 60+ on HR1, Alipay, WeChat Pay / TenPay on METHOD), make your data fields into numbers so that you can effectively analyse them.	+ 1.5 %	5.50%
Top 8	Research on consumption on the Internet	p1902066 CHE KUAN HOU Paul p2003754 WONG HOU IN Chris p2003851 leong lazaro antonio jose p2003773 WU IAT LONG Yanni p2003760 TONG CHI HIN Byron p2003789 SAM SENG FU Derek P2003832 CHANK IEK HANG Devin p2011633 LAM WAI LOK Roy	8	164	A modest title, but less specific. Nice sample size, just made* with very basic analysis* some user input need your judgement (log10000000000000 *7, 5小时, 小於20 on HR1, Alipay, WeChat Pay / TenPay on METHOD), make your data fields into numbers so that you can effectively analyse them. Not all data properly processed for analysis (有些同意)	+ 0.5 %	4.00%
Billyno1	Study the consumers review the online information and experience after purchased	Raven Lai Chon In p1602641 Jack Lee Wai Seng p2003722 Ivan Cheok Tsz Chung P2003867 Marco Man Lap Son p2003848 Doland Lei Man Hei p2003886 Sharon Chen Shuwen p1702842 Jack Sou Kin Cheong p1803741 Peter Lam Hou On p2003829	8	40 XX	Seriously insufficient data; Many fields not properly processed for analysis (男, 不太同意)! make your data fields into numbers! Resubmission required before demo next week	- 3 - 0.5 %	3.00%
SKS	Does the covid-19 make electronic payment popular?	Tony P2003813 Leo P2003735 Eric P2003741 Kit P2003792 Cooper P2010142 Max P2003716 Rocky P2003873 Jacky P2003703	8	82 XX	Email not send to all members! Nicer title. Insufficient data; Most data not properly processed for analysis (1 非常不像我, 3不太同意)! make your data fields into numbers! Resubmission required before demo next week	- 1 + 0.5 - 2 - 0.5 %	-4.00%

Proposal 2020

Team	Title	Members	Members	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
TRT	Online platforms open up new forms of consumption	Lebron:P2010096 Downey:P2010180 Crisp:P2010155 Fanny:P2010136 Nina:P2010101 Anita:P2010123 Melody:P2010174 Vicky:P2010161 Hardy:P2011981	9	Brief intro about background and study motivation* but can you really find out how economy works? Too big the idea? All SQs with proper ans format.* People may ans SQ1 with yes/no, wording matters. SQ2 is great* it fits your objective and may relate to other question* SQ3: what specific platfrom do you mean?? You may need to change the section title. SQ1 &3 are a bit too simple, you may want to ask more specific questions. The quationnaire is about a person generally; understand it better. Ask proper questions.	+ 1 + 1 + 2 %	4.00%
Top 8	How Coronavirus has changed consumer behavior	p1902066 CHE KUAN HOU Paul p2003754 WONG HOU IN Chris p2003851 leong lazaro antonio jose p2003773 WU IAT LONG Yanni p2003760 TONG CHI HIN Byron p2003789 SAM SENG FU Derek P2003832 CHANK IEK HANG Devin p2011633 LAM WAI LOK Roy	8	Brief intro, but consumers around the world?? Big mouth! Direct SQ1, nice but tell your scale, like 1-very much to 5-not much. Very nice SQ2 but time for what time window? Recent 1 month? It can be an open ans, not MCQ. Great SQ3 Good english except SQ1 grammer amd etc. mistakes*. ONLY english question!X	+ 2 + 2 + 0.5 -1 %	3.50%
Billyno1	Study the consumers review the online information and experience after purchased	Raven Lai Chon In p1602641 Jack Lee Wai Seng p2003722 Ivan Cheok Tsz Chung ------------- Marco Man Lap Son p2003848 Doland Lei Man Hei p2003886 Sharon Chen Shuwen p1702842 Jack Sou Kin Cheong p1803741 Peter Lam Hou On p2003829	8	Brief and poor english! But very good in using a marketing idea** All SQs with both languages, even on ans* VERY good SQ1 & 3 in chinese ****, but poor eng translation. SQ2 can be on both sides, it may come up with random numbers. Submission on grouping titleX	+ 2 + 1.5 + 4 -1 %	6.50%
Tony P2003813,Leo P2003735,Eric P2003741,Kit P2003792,Cooper P2010142,Max P2003716,Rocky P2003873,Jacky	social media	Tony P2003813 Leo P2003735 Eric P2003741 Kit P2003792 Cooper P2010142 Max P2003716 Rocky P2003873 Jacky ------------------	8	Long group name, change group nameX Brief intro, nice idea about our new habits* but not very related to the study requirement. SQ1, safe for what? Not specific. SQ2: People will have diff ideas on diff social software; SQ3, a bit too generall Fair english and confusing questions. ONLY english question!X Your title cannot tell what you are going to do, so you cannot find a clear goal to work on. Read carefully 01.pdf and you may think of better idea to create your questions. I suggest u to discuss more before moving on to real data collection, ans the whole questionnaire yourselves and get a better idea of what to do.	-1 +1 -1 %	-1.00%

Presentation and report 2019

It was quite enjoyable to have your presentation. To my surprise, many of you could speak fluent English, even in stressful conditions like this presentation. Some of you were able to tell a reasonable story from motive, background to analysis and results. Yes, able to communicate your idea would be attractive to most audience. It is actually a must for good presentation. Keep it up.

Some of you were helpful. When some members' part were incomplete, you gave some additional information after their parts. It was nice, if only on few occasions. However, you should not do that much; too much would be some distractions to your audience. A better solution would be using more rehearsal before the real presentation.

Many of you made use of other online resources to support your direction of research. Well done! You did work on a project with good background study! Keep it on, your work was more than high-school project now!

Many of you made use of online resources to help your data collection. Good! And many of you actually presented those part in detail. You were able to show your problem solving skills; it is an important thinking for adults. Very nice, you will be able to excel among the averages!

Pronunciation of keywords are important. Not all of you could do that well. Make sure you can speak the words right. Otherwise, people cannot understand your ideas and it would be a big discount to your merits.

Some of you were careless. You had Chinese titles in PPT slides; not acceptable! Your material to present should be in English. Your audience expected English as the medium of communications.

Some of you showed chart in you MSWORD report in your presentation. You should have put those charts in your PPT. Your presentation would be more fluent and it creates much less distraction to your audience.

The posture was a problem too. Some of you did not stand up while speaking! Some of you even hindered your group members in their presentation section! How careless. You had been warned in the demonstration section; still you did that. Very silly mistakes.

As for your reports and contents, many of you could not complete the Executive Summery (10%) satisfactorily. One of you put it as Purpose of the report. One group put most of it into your introduction, discount much in that part. You should have used it to capture the attention of people so that people may like to read your full report. You should have told people your important findings.

All of you could define good special questions so that you could accomplish what you wanted to investigate! Charts were generally reasonable. However, some pie charts were too rough: a large portion by a group and many other small groups. If possible, like when you have open-ended questions for age and expenditure, you should have created pies with more meaningful idea, and with smaller bins. Or using histogram would show your ideas better.

Some groups named the titles of your report sections other than required. The titles in business research report is quite standardized. That was why I gave you the report format and some sample copies for your reference. You were too careless not to follow that and invented your own titles. Lucky I could find your closely related sections. But some discounts were made. You shall follow the instruction closely ever after.

Strange one group of you made a section titled hypothesis right before conclusions. The word hypothesis has a special meaning in business research. You actually means business idea after your research. Nice, it was what you should suggest after your results. You may call it business suggestion. The only difficulty is that this part should closely related to your analysis results. For this first project in your university life, your analyses were quite weak and not much results you could make use of. Try better next time, maybe.

Some of you were not detail enough to address your findings in your conclusion part; instead, you only put the conclusion at the end of your analysis, and mixed with your business ideas based on that. Nice, but you can do better. Usually, you shall have your conclusion reiterates your important findings, or tell a more complete story after seeing all the results from your analysis. Then you tell people how you can make a good business out of that findings. Yes, this may be the first time you wrote a complete report, after your high-school chemical laboratory. Try to read more carefully about the project instruction or guideline at the beginning of the courses, next time.

Some of you in your reflection admitted the project was not easy. Yes it was. And you were aware of the importance of logical thinking. Very good. Yes, it is. Only by working logically you can arrive to reliable conclusion. More, some of you found difficulties in communicating your thoughts to other group members; even with long discussions. Yes, it is one of the biggest challenges in business projects. You have to work as a group, no individual. Heroism does not one work; you may lose a lot of good ideas from members; and miss out some important perspectives. Business usually serves many kinds of people, and only by collecting ranges of perspectives you may come up with a good decision.

The Appendix (5%) is supposed to be something about your programming codes or anything special. Most of you could not illustrate your virtue there.

Overall, not bad; but there are rooms for improvement. Try experience more in your future.

Proposal 2019

Team	Title	Members	Members	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
group3	[No title]	p1903550 梁焯恆anson p1903579 羅澤銘ken p1903512 葉智傑DEVIN	3	Late 1 hour! Not CC to all group members! Not conform to submission format! You have only copied my Qs; you should create your own Qs, SO you did not do your job. And your ans format is confusing. You should have put them into the yellow zone of the questionnaire. Think about that all again.	-1% - 1.5% -1%	-4.20%
group1=QUARTET	make a service	p1908173 胡梓剑 eric P1903598 賴弘燊 JACKY P1903531 方靖中 Anson p1908103 李凤君 ella	4	Nice idea of how to conduct your project. Multiple submissions. You have only copied my Qs; you should create your own Qs, SO you did not do your job. And your ans format is confusing. You should have put them into the yellow zone of the questionnaire. Think about that all again.	-2%	-0.83%
group4	project	P1903563 TANG KEI OU 鄧棋澳 Leo P1903544 ZHANG HONGRUI 張洪瑞 Rain P1903525 LAO SIN I 劉倩儀 Estella =	3	Late 1 hour! Not CC to all group members! Not conform to submission format! All Qs not very related to your study. They are all too general! And your ans format is confusing. You should have put them into the yellow zone of the questionnaire. Think about that all again.	-1% - 1% -1%	-4.21%
the second group	Questionnaire questions	P1908154 Francis 320739(temp) Calvin p1908189 John P1903582 Joe	4	The title means your project title. You may find a better title and change it later. With brief idea of your plan. Good Q1&2, but the open-end ans from Q1 will be very difficult to analyse. Q3 is a function of your browser, not the website. And you shall put a better focus on the message/info (in a website). That will help you make better questions. And your ans format is missing. You should have put them into the yellow zone of the questionnaire.	+0.5%	9.20%

Think carefully about what you should ask (for your special questions). They should be related to the project objectives in Chapter 1 of the notes. Your work in this stage is critical to your successful investigation of the project. Be mindful.

Translation 2019

No.	English	Score	Choice	Group
1	...who the author is	2	谁是作者	2
2	...the author qualifications and credentials	2	作者的资历与凭证	B
3	...my past experience with the author	2	我過去與作者的經歷	3
4	...the number of stars or level of the author in the group/site	2	作者在这个领域的级别	1
5	...for recommendation from someone I know	3	得到我认识人的推荐	2
6	...for an official 'stamp of approval'	2	获得官方的"认可标志"	1
7	...for the presence of editorial review process	2	有参与编辑评审过程	1
8	...its ranking in search engine output / likes	2	它在搜索引擎中的排名/喜歡	3
9	...if it is complete	2	是否信息是完整的	2
10	...if other sources validate the information	2	其他的资源是否证实了这些消息	1
11	...if it can verify claims elsewhere	3	如果它能核实其他地方的声明	1
12	...if it is consistent with what I believe	2	如果它符合我的信念	4
13	...its ability to explain what I have experienced	2	它能夠解釋我所經歷的事情	3
14	...if it is of my interest/benefits	2	它是否合乎我的兴趣/对我有利	1
15	...for the presence of contact information	3	附上联系信息	B
16	...if it is free of typos or broken links	2	它没有排印错误或连接不畅	1
17	...for its relevance to the topic	3	與該主題的相關性	3
18	...for its comprehensiveness	3	因为它内容詳盡	B
19	...for contradictory statement	4	有矛盾的陈述	1
20	...for its citations (of original source)	3	信息的引用（原始资源）	2
21	...its citations to scientific data or references	4	引用科学数据或参考资料	2
22	...professional-quality and clear writing	2	专业素质和清晰的写作思路	1
23	...plausibility of arguments	4	论证的合理性	1
24	...consider the author's goals/objectives for posting that information	4	考虑作者发布这个消息的意图	2
25	...absence of advertising	3	没广告	4
26	...paid access to information	2	是否需要付费来阅读信息	2
27	I regret for choosing it	2	我后悔选择了它	2
28	I should have chosen another product	2	我应该选择另外一个产品	4
29	If I turned back time, I would choose another one	3	如果能重来，我会选择另一个	2
46	I have tried different models	3	我已经试过了不同的款式	1
47	Trying different models is fun to me	2	尝试不同款式对我来说很有趣	2
48	I have tried most of available models	3	我已试过大部分可以试的款式	2
100	…if the information pubulished for a long time	4	发布的信息时间是否太久远	2
101	Pop up a window that is not related to information	4	弹出与信息无关的窗口	2
102	whether the content is plagiaried	4	内容是否有抄袭	1

Group	Sum of Score	Bonus
1	32	8.170213
2	38	9.702128
3	9	2.297872
4	7	1.787234
B	8	2.042553
Grand Total	94

Team	Title	Members	Members	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
group3	[No title]	p1903550 梁焯恆anson p1903579 羅澤銘ken p1903512 葉智傑DEVIN	3	nice translation	+2.3%	-0.70%
group1	[No title]	p1908173 胡梓剑 eric P1903598 賴弘燊 JACKY P1903531 方靖中 Anson p1908103 李凤君 ella	4	great translation but many many summissions	+8.17% -4%	1.17%
group4	project	P1903563 TANG KEI OU 鄧棋澳 Leo P1903544 ZHANG HONGRUI 張洪瑞 Rain P1903525 LAO SIN I 劉倩儀 Estella =	3	nice translation	+1.79%	-1.21%
the second group	[No title]	P1908154 Francis 320739(temp) Calvin p1908189 John P1903582 Joe	4	CC to all members, one one submission and great translation	+1% +1% +9.70%	8.70%

Grouping 2019

Team	Title	Members	#Members	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
[No name]	[No title]	p1903550 梁焯恆anson p1903579 羅澤銘ken p1903512 葉智傑DEVIN	3	Late 2mins, absent group name and project title	-1% -1% -1%	-3.0%
[No name]	[No title]	p1908173 胡梓剑 eric P1903598 賴弘燊 JACKY P1903531 方靖中 Anson p1908103 李凤君 ella	4	Late 3mins, absent group name and project title	-1% -1% -1%	-3.0%
group4	project	P1903563 TANG KEI OU 鄧棋澳 Leo P1903544 ZHANG HONGRUI 張洪瑞 Rain P1903525 LAO SIN I 劉倩儀 Estella =	3	Late 7mins, double submission, the only correct format!	-1% -2%	-3.0%
[No name]	[No title]	P1908154 Francis 320739(temp) Calvin p1908189 John P1903582 Joe	4	Late 12mins, absent group name and project title	-1% -1% -1%	-3.0%

Grouping 2018

Good, all of you could sumbit it on time! Be careful of your submissions; all should follow the guideline or you risk some penalties.

Orphan(s) if any should contact me and find a group as soon as possible or you risk failing the project.

Team	Title	Members	Members
Sixchill	self-congratulatary	WONG XINGHAO Esbe 1807828 WU YUEJING STEVEN 1807885 ZHANG ENHE KEN 1807847 LIU DONG SIMON 1808701 CHEN CHENGWEI GALI 1807872 CHE KA CHONG CHRIS 1803679	6
AVENGERS	Awareness of self-congratulatory	P1803698 LEONG CHI FONG P1803722 CHAN KENG WA P1803663 LO HOI U P1803738 WAN HOU MAN P1803763 CHAN WEN P1803776 WONG CHAN HONG P1803719 WU CHIA MIN	7
N.O. 1	The effect of Social media	王萌萌P-18-0783-1 张文洁P-18-0786-6 卜晓祺P-18-0781-2 林彦妤P-18-0370-3 黄惠仪P-18-0375-7 林咏琪P-18-0780-9	6
Retake carry	when the people feel self-congratulatory	p1702896 chan kin pan (pan) p1702861 Ao Ieong Man Kit (Jaden) p1702804 Lao Chi Hang (Hang) p1702877 Wong Hang Fok (Alexander) p1602635 Cheng Lok Lam (Ben) p1803741 sou kin cheng (jack)	6

Proposal 2018

Team	Title	Members	Members	Comments	Remarks
Sixchill	self-congratulatary	WONG XINGHAO Esbe 1807828 WU YUEJING STEVEN 1807885 ZHANG ENHE KEN 1807847 LIU DONG SIMON 1808701 CHEN CHENGWEI GALI 1807872 CHE KA CHONG CHRIS 1803679	6	Very good SQs!! They are all very related to the topic this year, but why some displacement in the Excel?! You can move forward and plan for the next stage: datacollection!	+2%
AVENGERS	Awareness of self-congratulatory	P1803698 LEONG CHI FONG P1803722 CHAN KENG WA P1803663 LO HOI U P1803738 WAN HOU MAN P1803763 CHAN WEN P1803776 WONG CHAN HONG P1803719 WU CHIA MIN	7	Very short proposal in Word file. SQs are not very related to the topic this year, but nice SQ3!	+0.5%
N.O. 1	The effect of Social media	王萌萌P-18-0783-1 张文洁P-18-0786-6 卜晓祺P-18-0781-2 林彦妤P-18-0370-3 黄惠仪P-18-0375-7 林咏琪P-18-0780-9	6	Very short description in mail content. SQs are not very related to the topic this year, but nice SQ2! Try elaborate SQ2 to make even better SQs	+0.5%
Retake carry	when the people feel self-congratulatory	p1702896 chan kin pan (pan) p1702861 Ao Ieong Man Kit (Jaden) p1702804 Lao Chi Hang (Hang) p1702877 Wong Hang Fok (Alexander) p1602635 Cheng Lok Lam (Ben) p1803741 sou kin cheng (jack)	6	late 4 hours! Very short description in mail content. SQs are nice, only a bit general. You can make them more specific!	-4.0%

Data 2018

Team	Title	Members	Members	Max sample size	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Sixchill	self-congratulatary	WONG XINGHAO Esbe 1807828 WU YUEJING STEVEN 1807885 ZHANG ENHE KEN 1807847 LIU DONG SIMON 1808701 CHEN CHENGWEI GALI 1807872 CHE KA CHONG CHRIS 1803679	6	330	Very good collection! But the data was not input into the format I required! Input your data as soon as possible into the data sheet of the questionnaire! You may score huge bonus... at the end!	-1.0%	+1%
AVENGERS	Awareness of self-congratulatory	P1803698 LEONG CHI FONG P1803722 CHAN KENG WA P1803663 LO HOI U P1803738 WAN HOU MAN P1803763 CHAN WEN P1803776 WONG CHAN HONG P1803719 WU CHIA MIN	7	140	Quite nice your collection, AGE and SQ1 (or SQ2 in wrong format) Make sure you correct that before analysis.	0.0%	+0.5%
N.O. 1	The effect of Social media	王萌萌P-18-0783-1 张文洁P-18-0786-6 卜晓祺P-18-0781-2 林彦妤P-18-0370-3 黄惠仪P-18-0375-7 林咏琪P-18-0780-9	6	124	Quite nice your collection; double submission; perfect data input format!	-2% + 2%	+0.5%
Retake carry	when the people feel self-congratulatory	p1702896 chan kin pan (pan) p1702861 Ao Ieong Man Kit (Jaden) p1702804 Lao Chi Hang (Hang) p1702877 Wong Hang Fok (Alexander) p1602635 Cheng Lok Lam (Ben) p1803741 sou kin cheng (jack)	6	300	Very Nice! perfect data input format! Keep it on!	2.0%	-2.0%

Presentaion 2018

Nice to see your presentation! Overall, they are very good!!

Your contents are mostly okay, but it is not yet perfect. First, the order of presented topics should be logical. And to help audience to understand your work, the analysis should starts with simple things, like descriptive statistics, basic pie charts, then lastly the complicated analysis with multiple column charts and regression. And lastly conclusion, which should be based on your analysis. Make it specific and relevant to your project objectives!

A less frequent problem among you is the texty slides; you should not expect the audience to read. They should look at you while you are talking, as if you talk to your friends. To make your talk good, sufficient rehearsal is important for your own confidence. At least you will not get blank (in your mind) when you feel stressful on the stage! Doing more presentation can help!

You should also make better uses of your visual aid, talking is boring, try use interesting image and chart to help, so make good use of slide title too. It helps your audience not to get lost. And no Chinese whenever possible! It is an English presentation!

Lastly, one group rarely asked sensible questions, which made them score bad in presentation!

Report 2018

Warning: SixChill said they collected 480 samples but I only get 330, and it was not in the format the project requires! Update your data collected to me ASAP!!!

Executive summery should go first! It is for the top executives to read. Make it short but showing all your good points there!

Many of you must have tasted it: the cooperation in project is most important. The project is just too big to work without reasonable coordination. So communication is of prime importance!!! Make yourselves nice and easy to work with! Always smile! The school is a miniature of the society, which you will work in. It is very different from home in which you have all the unconditional loves and concerns. You have to work out your relations with strangers, even as bad as Billy a guy, you have to talk to!

I can see many of you could create charts and diagrams that can show your points! Very good! I also see that you could get hold of the questionnaire and used that wisely with your understanding! Amazing!! Yet some charts that you created were in Chinese!! That is no good! It is an English report. Make it English whenever possible! But strange enough not all groups worked on regression analysis, which is a very powerful tool in excel! Statistics is the most modern tool to human investigations. Try your best to understand how you may use it to illustration and prove your points!

Some of you used a lot secondary sources for your project. Very nice, it shows your ideas with good supports. But be careful, do not use that too much. It mudded your work and your own contributions in the study! Keep those only support your point or those that will lead audiences to your work! Another deficiency was that the citations were not yet professional. You will learn how to do that in the second semester! Looking forward to working you out again!

Presentaion 2017

One group failed because they had serious fraud in fabricating data. The 96 samples they submitted the first time was not used! And, the very little part of data (only 41) they had collected was far from sufficient. It would be unfair to the other groups if I do not fail them! Unlucky are those hardworking students in the failed group. They should try very very hard for their examination.

For the rest of the 3 groups, very good job, I could see your spirits of group work! Only by cooperation of all group members you could achieve. Some of you got good connections and skills so they could collect huge amount of data! Many of you spent quite some efforts to create the many charts and diagrams in your analyses. And then, you had very good ideas on marketing indeed! Not only you could use terms like demographics, some of you got some ideas on trends and psychology too, though simple.

Many of you could structure of the presentations quite well: start with the overview and easy analysis, then the more difficult ones. For analysis, it was nice to start with the profile, like gender, then some charts, and lastly the regression analysis.

After the analysis, many of you could make use of the results to formulate some marketing ideas. This was only your first business project; what you could achieve was nice! Later, you shall learn to use the results more directly. Instead of applying the general idea of the analysis results, you shall try to pinpoint to a problem by using your specific results. Actually, the group with many multiple column charts could explain their uses of the results fluently. Look at their ways of creating charts, their success was in their details! All of you can do that! You only need more practices.

For the Q&A session, most of you could perform quite well, at least you tried to get to the points! But do not let your audience wait too long, you should answer their questions within 90 seconds, otherwise, you lose all their focus. Sometimes, an expression of brief idea would be nice, you do not need to go into detail. Shorten your response time! Or you may say you do not know how; although it is very bad to do that. you have to respond like an adult. And, try not to show your emotions in your presentation. The presentation is about communicating your idea. Your emotion would only hinder people reception to your messages.

Congratulations! I could see that, generally, you could handle the project. Even the failed group was only lazy, they would have flied if they worked hard.

Grouping 2017

Team	Title	Members	Members	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Ahunters	Social Media Using And Buying Habit Research	吳煒堽 P1504752 劉智恆 P1702804 阮國良 P1707546 鍾健豪 P1702783 劉沛然 P1708793 羅曉娟 P1702858	6	Late 2 mins!	-1.0%	-1.0%
Anonymous	How the Social APPs influent teenagers' health, behavior and character?	P1708868 SUN QINXIAO P1708814 XIE YOUKUN P1702877 WONG HANG FOK P1702861 AO IEGONG MAN KIT P1702896 PAN CHAN KIN	5	Late 13 mins! Wrong email title format	-1% -1%	-2.0%
HappyDayTeam	The internet's thinking and perception of human beings	Lei man pan p1702883 wu jia tao p1702799 xin han yu p1702823 wang yu chen p1708801 wang ruo xin p1708852 chen shu wen p1702842	6	Late 2 mins!	-1.0%	-1.0%
Billy is handsome, maybe	The Economic Potential Of Modern Social Media	王伟涵 Ken P-17-0883-3 黄振星 Seng P-17-0283-9 张兆尹 Sulejmani P-17-0965-7 周恒炜 Henry P-17-0971-6 王衍凯 Kevin P-17-0882-0	5	Late 18 mins!	-1.0%	-1.0%

Proposal 2017

After some investigations, it was found that the corrupted email attachedmnet was the error originated from the school email system, thus the remarks were adjusted.

Team	Title	Members	Members	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Ahunters	Social Media Using And Buying Habit Research	吳煒堽 P1504752 劉智恆 P1702804 阮國良 P1707546 鍾健豪 P1702783 劉沛然 P1708793 羅曉娟 P1702858	6	Nice idea of your focal object in this project! Q1 is in Question form, but answers are from agree to disagree!! Confusing to interviewees. Others ok.	+1%	0.0%
Anonymous	How the Social APPs influent teenagers' health, behavior and character?	P1708868 SUN QINXIAO P1708814 XIE YOUKUN P1702877 WONG HANG FOK P1702861 AO IEGONG MAN KIT P1702896 PAN CHAN KIN P-17-0281-0 KUOK KUN IP Jeff P-17-0288-3 LEI MAN PAN Ben	7	Short, yet good introduction, plan & indea of your project! (XCorrupted XLS file and I cannot comment your questions!) All Qs are related to APP; it is less relevent to our focus on marketing. Create at least a few questions, so that your results may help marketing.	+3%	1.0%
HappyDayTeam	The internet's thinking and perception of human beings	Lei man pan p1702883 wu jia tao p1702799 xin han yu p1702823 wang yu chen p1708801 wang ruo xin p1708852 chen shu wen p1702842	6	Very short description about your focus or idea. Your description is about your personal opinion. Mind your English in all submissions! All Qs are related to Apps. Your focus seems to deviate from the topic this year. Review Chapter 1 and get a better focus for marketing.	1.0%	0.0%
Billy is handsome, maybe	The Economic Potential Of Modern Social Media	王伟涵 Ken P-17-0883-3 黄振星 Seng P-17-0283-9 张兆尹 Sulejmani P-17-0965-7 周恒炜 Henry P-17-0971-6 王衍凯 Kevin P-17-0882-0 陈建成 Ezra P-16-0262-2	6	Very clear and strong title! Very good idea about your investigation focus, it meets the project focus this year! (X Corrupted XLS file and I cannot comment your questions! X) Q1, influence: it would be better to identify what kind of influence, so it may help your project focus. Good Q2 and Q3 about $$.	+0.5% + 2%	1.5%

Data 2017

Team	Title	Members	Members	Max sample size	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Ahunters	Social Media Using And Buying Habit Research	吳煒堽 P1504752 Oscar 劉智恆 P1702804 Hang 阮國良 P1707546 Wilson 鍾健豪 P1702783 Luke 劉沛然 P1708793 Jaren 羅曉娟 P1702858 Lisa	6	NA	Late till now, 6 days +	-10.0%	-10.0%
Anonymous	How the Social APPs influent teenagers' health, behavior and character?	P1708868 SUN QINXIAO Sean P1708814 XIE YOUKUN Cole P1702877 WONG HANG FOK Alexander P1702861 AO IEGONG MAN KIT Jaden P1702896 PAN CHAN KIN Pan P-17-0281-0 KUOK KUN IP Jeff P-17-0288-3 LEI MAN PAN Ben	7	96	Late 29 hours. Why Q47 to Q51 are empty? They include your special questions for the analysis!	-7.5%	-6.5%
HappyDayTeam	The internet's thinking and perception of human beings	Lei man pan p1702883 Ben wu jia tao p1702799 Tao xin han yu p1702823 Thomas wang yu chen p1708801 Yoko wang ruo xin p1708852 Rosalyn chen shu wen p1702842 Sharon	6	NA	Late till now, 6 days +	-10.0%	-10.0%
Billy is handsome, maybe	The Economic Potential Of Modern Social Media	王伟涵 Ken P-17-0883-3 黄振星 Seng P-17-0283-9 张兆尹 Sulejmani P-17-0965-7 周恒炜 Henry P-17-0971-6 王衍凯 Kevin P-17-0882-0 陈建成 Ezra P-16-0262-2 P-16-0255-7 CHEOK ION FAT Michael	6	124	Late 3 days and 7 hours, 79 hours	-5.0%	-3.5%

Grouping 2016

Team	Title	Members	Max sample size	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Handsome Billy	Effect of mobile phones on human	楊華琛 IEONG WA SAM P-16-0250-3 朱佳琪 ZHU JIAQI P-16-0897-1 馮啟軒 FONG KAI HIN P-16-0258-2 謝恆鋒 TSE HANG FONG P-16-0268-9 (P-16-0266-0 曾汝明 CHANG U MENG if he comes)	NA	Good sense in the title, but a little too broad your scope; least number of members	+1%	+1%
KERRB	Economics 5 poison of little guys	p1602541 Ken p1602522 Brian p1602622 Ezra p1602425 Redtea P1602641 Raven	NA	Double submission; not CC to all other members	-2%-1%	-3.0%
Macausolo	Probe ipm's students about socialApps	彭家辉 P-16-0260-3 李美仪 P-16-0246-3 胡家城 P-16-0256-3 鄒寶華 P-16-0244-4 賴昕愉 P-16-0248-2	NA	Good sense in the title, but u may have limited your scope and target population unnecessarily	+1%	+1%
6 to fly	3 question for the report	Luke p16-0265-4 Eric p16-0247-9 Tony p16-0257-6 Dawson p16-1007-3 Janet p16-0243-1 Aaron p16-0895-2	NA	Late; too many people in original submission	-1% -2%	-3.0%
your group name	{your group name}	Nicolas(p-16-0245-0), Ben (p-16-0263-5), Leo (P-16-0249-8), Michael(P-16-0255-7)	NA	Late; good email content; bad title, bad group name	-1% +1%	0.0%
Bigban	Social media & youth's mental health	JEFF-p1602595 Kelvin-p1602673 Roy-p1602538 Franco-p1602616 Tommy-p1602519 MIng-P1602412	NA	Late; play safe in the title; try to be more specific in your later submissions	-1%	-1.0%
LKJAKR	ALL member names and sudent numbers	CHONG IO KENG P-16-0291-0 LAM KA HOU P-16-0401-9 FENG YINGYIN P-16-0238-5 WANG XINGYUE P-16-0891-4 CUI KEXINP-16-0996-7 LI YILIN P-16-0905-2	NA	Late; Chinese mail format! That is not your title! Mind your english even in the title!	-1%	-1.0%
group2	ocial media & youth's mental health	Ella p1603938 Michelle p1603919 Aaron p1602366 Zhang Hanyu p1609014 Sienna P1609033	NA	Late; not CC to all members; Mind your english even in the title!	-1%, -1%update	-2.0%
FRIENDS	Social media	p-16-0377-2 Alice p-16-0289-9 Avis p-16-0889-3 Edwin p-16-0405-7 J p-16-0899-3 Ross p-16-0993-2 Yuki	NA	Late; too broad your scope, you can find a better focus	-1%	-1.0%
Vicki's Group	Social media & youth's mental health	陳文雅 p1604038 梁鵬偉 p1609108 李渠基 p1609087 周玖玥 p1609127 羅慧琪 p1603957 李世豪 p1602870	NA	only one minute late! 5 secs to deadline	-1% -> 0%	-1.0% -> 0%

Proposal 2016

If you do not find your name below. You may score no mark for your project! Contact me as soon as possible!!

Team	Title	Members	Members	Max sample size	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
Handsome Billy	Effect of mobile phones on human	楊華琛 IEONG WA SAM P-16-0250-3 朱佳琪 ZHU JIAQI P-16-0897-1 馮啟軒 FONG KAI HIN P-16-0258-2 謝恆鋒 TSE HANG FONG P-16-0268-9 (P-16-0266-0 曾汝明 CHANG U MENG if he comes)	4	NA	A fine roadmap for your tasks to do but they are only for the proposal. A very nice set of Qs which will be very useful!	+2%	+3%
KERRB	summery	p1602541 Ken p1602522 Brian p1602622 Ezra p1602425 Redtea P1602641 Raven	5	NA	A strange title! Nice idea about the social trends and psychological change. Mind your English with punctuation, too! The Qs cannot fix your focus. Their answer cannot help u to see their 'change' as well! It is ususally difficult to see the changes in one-shot questionnaire survey, be careful. U may have to rethink some more specific interests to investigate.	+1%	-2.0%
Macausolo	Probe ipm's students about socialApps	彭家辉 P-16-0260-3 李美仪 P-16-0246-3 胡家城 P-16-0256-3 鄒寶華 P-16-0244-4 賴昕愉 P-16-0248-2	5	NA	Fine idea about habit, but its definition is a bit vague. And Q1 & Q2 deviate from your research idea. Think about a better match between focus and your questions.	+0%	+1%
6 to fly	3 question for the report	Luke p16-0265-4 Eric p16-0247-9 Tony p16-0257-6 Dawson p16-1007-3 Janet p16-0243-1 Aaron p16-0895-2	6	NA	Nice overall! Good focus on people interpersonal skill! Q2 is less directly related to your focus. See if you have better idea. Q3 is an opinion question. This was the 'truth' that I want to test. When u ask them directly, make sure you have some idea what it means to your research; Set a better title!	+2.5%	-0.5%
Fabulous Five	Social media & youth's mental health	Nicolas(p-16-0245-0), Ben (p-16-0263-5), Leo (P-16-0249-8), Michael(P-16-0255-7) Samantha (p1608933)	5	NA	Change of group name; very nice idea of what to do and what to analyse! Q1 to Q3 all about time!! It is difficlut to measure time, different person may define time differently. Try to let them compare between those people you ask for!	-1% +2%	1.0%
Bigban	Social media & youth's mental health in Macao	JEFF-p1602595 Kelvin-p1602673 Roy-p1602538 Franco-p1602616 Tommy-p1602519 MIng-P1602412	6	NA	Try not to limit your target to Macau only. Half your proposal is an introduction! Self-recognition a good focus to study!! Try to find a even better focus, not by location alone. But the Qs are not fitting your good focus. Rethink Q2 & Q3.	+0.5%	-0.5%
LKJAKR	the surveys about APP	CHONG IO KENG P-16-0291-0 LAM KA HOU P-16-0401-9 FENG YINGYIN P-16-0238-5 WANG XINGYUE P-16-0891-4 CUI KEXINP-16-0996-7 LI YILIN P-16-0905-2	6	NA	Wrong email title! Proposal not fitting your Qs. Good Q1 & Q2, but are they all they choices people have? Q3 may not be easily understood by all people. Try to make sure that all audience can read and understand the question as u desire. (Excel skill is to learn in class :) )	-1% +2%	0.0%
group2	social media & youth's mental health	Ella p1603938 Michelle p1603919 Aaron p1602366 Zhang Hanyu p1609014 Sienna P1609033 Andreia P-16-0397-6	6	NA	Fair proposal with vauge idea. Very good Q1! Good observation and recognition of your experience! Very good Q2 too!!! But did u mean people do to u or u do to people? It is easy to be confusing. Q3 is strange, can they send message with the social media is dead? Get a better title	+4%	2.0%
FRIENDS	Social media	not in this class : ( p-16-0377-2 Alice p-16-0289-9 Avis p-16-0889-3 Edwin p-16-0405-7 J p-16-0899-3 Ross p-16-0993-2 Yuki	5	NA	Nice idea of their task list in the research! Wow, good understanding of my questionnaire! Nice to know how they think they are like that! But you cannot make 4 questions!! If you do that, u will get 8% deduction!	+1% +1%	+1%
Vicki's Group	Social media & youth's mental health	陳文雅 p1604038 梁鵬偉 p1609108 李渠基 p1609087 周玖玥 p1609127 羅慧琪 p1603957 李世豪 p1602870	6	NA	The short proposal message cannot tell much. Nice Q1 & Q2! See if they can help you find a better focus, and title!	+0.5%	+0.5%

Demo 2016

Well done your demonstration! Most of you could accomplish the most important part of analysis! For those who could not output satisfactory results, you may continue on your data collection. Statistics is a strange thing: generally, the bigger the sample size, the better the results. I wish you recorded down what I commented right when you finished your demo; you are going to have a even better presentation. Below I have some general comments across all groups. Make sure the environment will be ready before you start, all by yourselves, e.g. lighting, projectile, air conditionings, audience attentions, etc.

Mind your time, not too long nor too short in all sections.
Use other source of information is good! But remember to quote references (citation!) for your additional research, if any!
Tell audience the technologies you use! Show them your skills! Technical ability is very important in this project. Make sure you make the best use of all possible Excel functionalities that you can handle (but not as a teaching lesson, do not teach them how to use statistics/Excel).
Make sure you say what the analysis or the variable means; when related meanings does not mean what it exactly is, the analysis and implication becomes unreliable.
Tell people your findings and implications. Show your contributions! Most of you can explain the phenomenon of your statistical result, but not all could make use of the results for business purposes. What you can do about this world matters!
Limit your Chinese words in PPT slices; it should be an English presentation!

Report 2016

Nice to have your reports, some of you did spend good effort on them! Congratulations! You will know that your hard work will pay off when you start your career! Well, but after all, you are still not graduated, no one work is perfect. Below are some comments for your project reports.

On the GOOD side:

Some of you presented your extra work clearly, like SUMPRODUCT, BOXPLOT, and SPSS. And some found some good resources for further research, too! Some exceptional job is that some made use of my old data to do some comparisons! That was nice, although that did not help score much. But I appreciate your thinking!!

A lot of you knew your English limitation, communications and cooperation problem too. GOOD, the worst thing is you do not know you have limitation! Well then improve it all your days when you still have an opportunity!

Some of you could elaborate your idea, directly from results. And some can suggest applications to multiple industries! Very well done!!!

On the BAD side:

Some missed out the essentials and could not fulfill all requirements as a report: regression analysis, tables, multicolumn charts or even the subject of conclusion! They are tools to help your reasoning!

I suggested a report of 3000 to 4000 words, some wrote only 2000, and there should be much more to report and elaborate. They caught the deer, but forgot the horns!

One very serious problem was plagiarism! NOTE THAT IT IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM FOR UNDERGRADUTES! One group copied and pasted one paragraph from a webpage (http://www.slideshare.net/IrfanCuj/social-media-57816953). And they forgot to modify properly and leave out some citations without the reference!! They failed the part of conclusion, which occupied 30% of the report and 12% of the project. Luckily, their other parts were not too bad.

Some could not elaborate more on your ideas; ideas seemed to be superficial and without evidence to support the possibility.

Some used SPSS, but the tool was not mentioned!!!!

Ugly tables!!! Serious mistakes! Also, all charts should be inside the content of the report!

Keep on your good work, you will have a bright mind!

Grouping 2015

Team	Title	Members	Max sample size	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
DiamondSixth	How people need mobile chat apps to make friends	梁天奇 Jacky p1501971 周小力 Lily p1507708 霍達 DaDa p1507687 李知澳 Alena p1507517 陳佳林 Gelina p1507555 仝笛 Candice p1508917	NA	Late; Double submission; nice you could specify to chat apps! Do you mean making new friends or simply keep them in touch?	-1-2% + 0.5%	-2.5%
VIP	How people need qq to make friends	翟翰墨 p1507671 樊佑军 p1507652 潘承锦 p1507536 杨奉平 p1508901	NA	Late; Not CC to all members; Is QQ popular anymore? A little too specific on QQ, think twice for the available population for your data collection.	-1% - 1% + 0.3%	-1.7%
Tick	How people live without all mobile apps?	Ng I San (Natalie) : p1503411 Song Jiayi (Annie) : p1507693 Lin Shuping (Alice) : p1507733 Suarez Pocholo Sebastian Del Rosario (Rosario) : p1502372 Chio Nga Kei (Julie) : p1502431	NA	Late; Nice idea, but it is a research in the reverse direction (actually on an extreme of absolute no app!) I am not sure if my questions can help u in that direction. Think about how your analysis will look like and make adjustment later.	-1% + 0.3%	-0.7%
GoodGoodGroup	How people need mobile Apps and friends?	1.郭嘉怡(P1502391) 2.李樂怡(P1502453) 3.胡宗正(P1502412) 4.董展圖(P1503433) 5.陳冬東(P1507711) 6.嚴鎮華(P1507765)	NA	Late; the same title as mine?	-1%	-1.0%
Eternal Team	how people need internet and communication	莫希昆 P1507614 楊梓琪 P1507574 蘇子健 P1502033 林泳龍 P1502052 陸思羽 P1507593	NA	Late; my title is already general, you made it even more general? But about communication is a nice idea. Try to narrow down your focus.	-1% +0.2%	-0.8%
The Last Group	Communication Technology	FONG MENG HIO - Menghio - p1502130 CHEONG KA KIT - Eric - p1502178 GUAN QI YAO - Adian - p1502111 HO MENG IEONG - Gabriel - p1502218	NA	The shorter title is a bit too general but cannot show your idea clearly, make sure you know what you would like to find out with your questions.	0.2%	0.2%
OMG	How people need mobile apps and friends?	P1502197 HON CHI KENG (Danny) P1502159 CHAN KA IAN (Jordan) P1502090 KU UN I (Eva) P1502011 CHANG IOI KEI (Becky) P1502071 CHENG UT I (Hebe)	NA	Could not think of a more specific title? Work on it with your questions and experience!	0%	0.0%
GGWP	It is project title	NG CHI HIM <p1502124@ipm.edu.mo> P1502105@ipm.edu.mo; P1502202@ipm.edu.mo; P1502027@ipm.edu.mo	NA	Late; not all names presented; bad title, think about a better focus!	-1% -1%	-2.0%
funny boy	funny project	P1502084 - Mike P1502046 - Sai P1502065 - Dennis p1502143 - Miles	NA	Late; it can be funny, but still a bad title, think about a better focus!	-1%	-1.0%
Rookies	How mobile apps influence our relationship with friends?	1. Luke p1502162 2. Tina p1502181 3. Sunny p1507601 4. Karris p1507580 5. Tiana p1502008	NA	Very nice idea about investiaging their relationship! You think out of the box!! Hope you can make up good questions for it!!!	1%	1%

Proposal

Review not only yours, but comments on other groups. It helps your idea on the project.

Team

Title

Members

Max sample size

Comments

Remarks

Accumulated Bonus so far

DiamondSixth

How people need mobile chat apps to make friends

梁天奇 Jacky p1501971
周小力 Lily p1507708
霍達 DaDa p1507687
李知澳 Alena p1507517
陳佳林 Gelina p1507555
仝笛 Candice p1508917

You have the plan of order of tasks, but not a rationale explained. Your questions still point to a good directions! Online questionnaire already in place!! A real hardworking groupo! Be careful the question numbers doesn't match with mine, and the online answers need some post-processing!

2.0%

-0.5%

VIP

Are the social softwares necessary to keep a relationship like true love?

翟翰墨 p1507671
樊佑军 p1507652
潘承锦 p1507536
杨奉平 p1508901
MA HAOZHE p1507620@ipm.edu.mo

Nice study of goodness in keeping relationship by WeChat! Beware of Q2: Asking Frequency and Ans of Y/N?? Q3 will be quite difficult to analyse, let's see.

1.0%

-0.7%

Tick

How people live without all mobile apps?

Ng I San (Natalie) : p1503411
Song Jiayi (Annie) : p1507693
Lin Shuping (Alice) : p1507733
Suarez Pocholo Sebastian Del Rosario (Rosario) : p1502372
Chio Nga Kei (Julie) : p1502431
Hazel LOU P-15-0199-0

I mixed up the classes and dates! Nice idea about what you like to find out, but you are only allowed to make 3 questions! Well, the questions are related to your title and project idea, but your definition of apps may be ambigious. Even "Phone" in iphone is an app! So your Q1 & 2 may not be able to capture good answers for your analysis. Try answer the questions among your group members and you may see the problem. You would better make them more specific.

+1%

0.3%

GoodGoodGroup

Is using apps an enhancement of efficiency or a waste of time

1.郭嘉怡(P1502391)
2.李樂怡(P1502453)
3.胡宗正(P1502412)
4.董展圖(P1503433)
5.陳冬東(P1507711)
6.嚴鎮華(P1507765)

Thoughtful questions, esp Q2! And they all match your topic! Good! It is nice to have Chinese version only, since the focus of the whole study is on Chinese Young People.

2.5%

1.5%

Eternal Team

The addiction caused by mobil apps

莫希昆 P1507614
楊梓琪 P1507574
蘇子健 P1502033
林泳龍 P1502052
陸思羽 P1507593

Good idea to look for causes of addiction and find solution too! Q1 can point to both +/- directions, be careful about your interpretation, or change that Q1?

2.0%

1.2%

The Last Group

Communication Technology

FONG MENG HIO - Menghio - p1502130
CHEONG KA KIT - Eric - p1502178
GUAN QI YAO - Adian - p1502111
HO MENG IEONG - Gabriel - p1502218

You have the plan of order of tasks, but not a rationale explained. Nice questions, and they seem quite useful to your topics.

0.5%

0.7%

OMG

How people need mobile apps and friends?

P1502197 HON CHI KENG   (Danny)
P1502159 CHAN KA IAN      (Jordan)
P1502090 KU UN I               (Eva)
P1502011 CHANG IOI KEI    (Becky)
P1502071 CHENG UT I         (Hebe)

Good keywords they grap! But studying how long, without elaboration wht you actually mean, is a bit too simple. For Q2 & 3 people may have more ans, like they may use recorded voice, should it be 1 or 2?

0.5%

GGWP/YGN

NG CHI HIM <p1502124@ipm.edu.mo>
P1502105@ipm.edu.mo;
P1502202@ipm.edu.mo;
P1502027@ipm.edu.mo

What PT means? You have the plan of order of tasks, but not a rationale explained. Q1 may vary very much and may not be useful, Q3 is a bit strange, what do you expect to use it for the analysis and yet helpful to your topic?

0.0%

-2.0%

funny boy

funny project

P1502084 - Mike
P1502046 - Sai
P1502065 - Dennis
p1502143 - Miles

Still that title? Your proposal talked about expressing feeling, but your questions points to very different direction?! Try to figure out a better set of questions that may help your investigation on young people.

0.0%

-1.0%

Rookies

How mobile apps influence our relationship with friends?

1. Luke p1502162
2. Tina p1502181
3. Sunny p1507601
4. Karris p1507580
5. Tiana p1502008

Grouping in email title!? Think about carefully, on what aspect? Asking for kind of hotel and watches? Why? Related to your study? Think about that again, carefully, by considering what you want to find out!

-1.0%

Data

You may continue your data collection before your actual analysis with diagram and charts.

Team	Title	Members	Possible sample size	Comments	Remarks	Accumulated Bonus so far
DiamondSixth	How people need mobile chat apps to make friends	梁天奇 Jacky p1501971 周小力 Lily p1507708 霍達 DaDa p1507687 李知澳 Alena p1507517 陳佳林 Gelina p1507555 仝笛 Candice p1508917	122	With diagrams & charts already in data sheet, though look messy*! Messing up the data could be disastrous! Submit tidy work ever after! Missing MasterSheet?! Fix that! Your Q3 need some more work before analysis. It demands some manual efforts and your understanding of the ans. Not easy at all!	+0.8%	0.3%
VIP	Are the social softwares necessary to keep a relationship like true love?	翟翰墨 p1507671 樊佑军 p1507652 潘承锦 p1507536 杨奉平 p1508901 MA HAOZHE p1507620@ipm.edu.mo	692	Amazing collection of data*! Possible HUGE bonus! Your Q3 need some more work before analysis. It demands some manual efforts and your understanding of the ans. Not easy at all!	0.0%	-0.7%
Tick	How people live without all mobile apps?	Ng I San (Natalie) : p1503411 Song Jiayi (Annie) : p1507693 Lin Shuping (Alice) : p1507733 Suarez Pocholo Sebastian Del Rosario (Rosario) : p1502372 Chio Nga Kei (Julie) : p1502431 Hazel LOU P-15-0199-0	120	Group together the answers for Q3 with your understanding, it shall yeild some good results by charts Your Q50 is a bit too long… see how you can analyse it!	0.0%	1.3%
GoodGoodGroup	Is using apps an enhancement of efficiency or a waste of time	1.郭嘉怡(P1502391) 2.李樂怡(P1502453) 3.胡宗正(P1502412) 4.董展圖(P1503433) 5.陳冬東(P1507711) 6.嚴鎮華(P1507765)	125	By charts you can create some nice results. See if you can create some tables among your own Qs! Not easy with course material alone!!!	0.0%	1.5%
Eternal Team	The addiction caused by mobil apps	莫希昆 P1507614 楊梓琪 P1507574 蘇子健 P1502033 林泳龍 P1502052 陸思羽 P1507593	94	By charts & regression you can create some nice results. Your Q3 are too free, make some adjustment to the same unit, say hours, it can then work with regresssions nicely! Maybe you can log() it!	0.0%	1.2%
The Last Group	Communication Technology	FONG MENG HIO - Menghio - p1502130 CHEONG KA KIT - Eric - p1502178 GUAN QI YAO - Adian - p1502111 HO MENG IEONG - Gabriel - p1502218	203	Nice update of conditional formatting and data validation*! You should have highlight that in your email text! Amazing collection of data! Possible much bonus!	+1%	1.7%
OMG	How people need mobile apps and friends?	P1502197 HON CHI KENG (Danny) P1502159 CHAN KA IAN (Jordan) P1502090 KU UN I (Eva) P1502011 CHANG IOI KEI (Becky) P1502071 CHENG UT I (Hebe)	365 -1	Amazing collection of data! Possible much bonus! Your Qs does not match the data sheet, fix that! This group is cunnig, you have to choose which 3 Qs you are to choose for your project by next week, email to me your updated excel file.	0.0%	0.5%
GGWP/YGN	PT	NG CHI HIM <p1502124@ipm.edu.mo> P1502105@ipm.edu.mo; P1502202@ipm.edu.mo; P1502027@ipm.edu.mo P-14-0223-0 林家瑜 LAM KA U Chase	100	By charts & regression you can create some nice results	0.0%	-2.0%
funny boy	funny project	P1502084 - Mike P1502046 - Sai P1502065 - Dennis p1502143 - Miles P-14-0216-5 吳瀚彬 WU HANBIN Blake	101	Group together the answers for Q3 with your understanding, it shall yeild some good results by charts	0.0%	-1.0%
Rookies	How mobile apps influence our relationship with friends?	1. Luke p1502162 2. Tina p1502181 3. Sunny p1507601 4. Karris p1507580 5. Tiana p1502008	99	Nice update of conditional formatting and/or data validation*! Your Qs does not match the data sheet, fix that! Group together the answers for Q3 with your understanding, it shall yeild some good results by charts	+1%	1%

Demo

Good practices:
Analyzing two to three variables at a time
Complete coverage of the questionnaire (Utilizing research resources, with your questions)
Prepared to lead audience into the depth of your research (Explaining why your conclusion is convincing)

Bad practices:
Inappropriate charts/analyses to tell your story
Go unprepared
Conclusion does not meet your initial objectives

Project feedback 2015

Report feedback 2015

After filtered for random fillings, your survey samples were as listed below. It helps you guess how your friends helped you indeed.

Group	Sample finanlized
DiamondSixth	103
Eternal Team	87
funny boy	83
GGWP	98
GoodGoodGroup	114
OMG	352
Rookies	96
THE LAST GROUP	193
Tick	124
VIP	675

Order of presentation topic in report is important; it should follow a logical order so that a reader can follow!

Quite good were your projects! I believe you must be quite hard-working on the project. The fight is fierce: The best presenting group scored least in report; the best overall group scored least bonus; the best bonus group was not at best in any other performance.

A few reports look inappropriate: they are gatherings of sentences from this and that websites!! Somehow they deviated too much from the topic of the research. Those who did that score very little. You may have a lot of philosophies, but this report is to prove an idea by data analysis, not by verbal/logical arguments. Try to stick to the focus of the project and with down to earth data analysis. A is A, B is B: that us what we call science. Only till conclusions or business implications you may have more freedom in using your results.

From your reports I know a lot of you have good reflection of your own. GOOD! Very good! Do that every time you finish a piece of work. It will help you grow. Grow fast, you have to grow anyway.

Presentation feedback 2015

Make sure you have emailed to me the most updated version of your data, if you have added more data after the first data submission. I will calculate the bonus on Wednesday (25 Nov) night! Never miss any submission!

Read carefully all requirements. It is a must for work and study. In haste, some of you missed out important parts in reports. Some missed some important analysis. Some missed the basics of reports, like cover page,

Some groups started with an ambition. But when somehow get lost in the middle of the presentation, lost confidence as well. The lesson: Try to get familiar with the material & improve your cheat-sheet writing.

Some results deviated from the objectives too much; and did not appear as a DIRECT relationship with the objectives/business implications. Try to stick to the objectives!

Make your project lean. We all do not know what is right. So trust your members' critics on you. It is painful, but as a student, 75% of the time they are right. It should help eliminate some unnecessary slides and ideas, for the project. Try to make good use of the project objectives as a measure for eliminations.

Not all groups are able to capture all the techniques taught on class, especially about regression (and VBA for e-comm major). Yes, great features are difficult, difficult techniques need time to get familiar with. Thus, try to reserve more time for making a great project.

Some of you can make use of the white board to explain some idea, with lighting control. Good. But it is good to do that in Q&A section; not for regular presentation section (in which you should have better presentation with PPT).

You should be mindful of the relations between different parts of the presentation. Say, analysis shall support your conclusion; the conclusion shall support your business implications, etc. Any deviation from your main task is only guess; which is not the idea of a survey project. What I intended is called modern scientific management.

A good presentation is not by working hard on your own. Try watching more presentations from other groups. It helps a lot.

Answer people clearly, and one at a time. Manage your whole presentation in an orderly manner is very important. Q&A should be very different from arguments like in the marketplace.

Terms to know for project, it should help your projects to come: motives, objectives, overview, background, research method, data collection, analysis, results, findings, conclusions, implications, discussions, limitations, lesson learnt, etc. They shall appear more or less in that order.

Overall, good! Wish you can develop your own style for your professional development.

Project Feedback - 2014

Some of you score very good data bonus, up till 2.6% on top of your actual score in the project. On the other hand, some of you have serious problem in data collection (about mismatched reference number of data) and they got some deduction. Also, some groups have serious penalty due to the following reasons: late submissions during the semester, skipping critical listening or some important sections in the report.

Most of you can write English good enough for business communications. But reporting demands a logical presentation. Some of you failed to follow the instructions and wrote a very bad report. Some conclusions did not have good support from your analysis. Learn more reporting skills in the years to come.

Your analysis should be the most important section for the report but some reports did not make the best use of your hardwork in the analysis to support the conclusion that you like to make. That means most charts in your presentation should also appear in the report.

Some executive summaries are too fancy. An executive summary should be formal and brief for busy people to read the most information in the shortest time.

Some other executive summaries are too vague. You should have made them more related to your actual researches that you have done.

Appendix is for supplementary information you think useful but not important. Some of you wrote something like a conclusion there!